longing for reunion with him

 




Fragments

 

 

we are pieces of ourselves

fragments

waiting to become one

when at last our love unites us again

eternally

and then we shall be whole

 

 

Kathy Lockhart
11/16/07





Poetry by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-11-16 at 08:31

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Phyllis J. Rhodes The PoetBay support member heart!
This is soooo good. It is a profound Truth!! It is how love really is.
2007-11-26


Zoya Zaidi
Indeed! OoooH! I love this!
((Hugs))
Love,
Zoya
2007-11-17


Dan Cederholm
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Wonderful written dear Kathy!!!

*APPLAUS*

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2007-11-17


lastromantichero
Youpoetry ooszes the love you feel and in engenders the lolve i feel for thee it is a wonderful feeling and you have described it so beautifully xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk Michael.
2007-11-16


Rob Graber
I can't resist adding: For me, this poem achieves a profound universality because the opening "we" reads BEAUTIFULLY in three ways: it can refer not only to the two separated lovers, but also to all of us as individuals seeking love, or even to all of humanity "waiting to become one" as a social group. Again, BRAVO!
2007-11-16


Rob Graber
Set as it is in the indefinite future, this has such a longing kind of beauty... it is religiously romantic in a way that an atheist can appreciate...
2007-11-16


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
separation is always hard and takes time to adjust I find - I like the idea of being a fragment in space just waiting to catch up with the other part of me

Elle x
2007-11-16


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Simply BRILLENT.

L.
2007-11-16