Lovers.. (Sad Love Poem)

Boy: Baby we need to talk.
Girl: Ricardo, what do you mean?
Boy: Something has come up...
Girl: What? Whats wrong? Is it bad?
Boy: I don't want to hurt you baby.
Girl: *Thinks* Omg I hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much.
Boy: Baby are you there?
Girl: Yeah I'm here what is so important?
Boy: I'm not sure if I should say.
Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please tell me.
Boy: I'm leaving...
Girl: Baby what are you talking about? I don't want you to leave me, I love you!
Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away.
Girl: Why? All of your family lives over here.
Boy: Well my father is sending me away to a boarding school far away.
Girl: I can't believe this.

[Father: (Picks up the other phone, interrups & yells furiously) Angely, what did I tell you about talking to boys?!!! Get off the damn phone!!! (And hangs up)]

Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad.
Girl: You know how he gets mad, but anyway I don't want you to go.
Boy: Would you run away with me?
Girl: Baby you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't...
You don't know what would happen if I did, my dad would kill me!!!
Boy: *Sad* Its okay I understand I guess.
Girl: *Thinking* I can't believe whats going on.
Boy: I need to give you something tonight, because I'm leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I need to see you.
Girl: Okay I will sneak out and meet you at the park.
Boy: Okay I meet you there in 20 minutes.

[They meet at a nearby park, they both hug each other. And he gives her a note.]

Boy: This is for you, I have to go.
Girl: *tear* (Begins to cry)
Boy: Baby don't cry, you know I love you. But I have to go!
Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away)

[They both go back home. And Angely begins to read the letter he gave her]

It says:

Angely, you probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a letter to you.

The truth about how much I care about you. The truth is that I never loved you, I hated you so much, you are a bitch & Don't you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you.
You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you bitch. You never did the right thing, I didn't think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before.
I will not miss you and thats a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to remember that.
Bitch you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me. Fuck, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon bitch.
Good bye,
-Ricardo.

[Angely begins to cry she throws the paper in the garbage & Cries for hours.]

A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely, then she gets a phone call.

Friend: How are you feeling?
Girl: I just can't believe this happend I thought he loved me.
Friend: o, about that. Ricardo left me a message, a few days ago.
He told me to tell you to look in your jacket pocket or something...
Girl: Umm okay.

[She finds a piece of paper in the jacket.]

It says:

Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter. I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words...

Hate = Love
Never = Always
Bitch = Baby
Will not = Will

I hope you didnt take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go thats why I wanted you to run away with me.
-Ricardo]

Girl: Omg.. its a letter, Ricardo does love me!!
He must of slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!!
Friend: Lol, okay but I g2g, call me later...
Girl: *Happy* Okay bye, I will be at home waiting for my baby to call me!!

Angely turns the TV on..

[Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died, we are still searching for survivors. This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80. It was on its way to an all boys boarding school." Reporter says.

[She turns off the TV, 3 days later she kills herself, because of the fact that Ricardo was dead and she had nothing to live for]

A day after that the phone rings, nobody answers. It was Ricardo, he called to leave a message.
Its Ricardo, I guess your not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight...
Becase I had to see you one last time. So I hope your not worried. I am staying for good. Sorry if you got scared, I promise to make it up to you, everything will be okay, I love you so much, call me bye!

[He eventually finds out what happend, and also kills himself..]





Short story by Sid
Read 1479 times
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Written on 2008-03-24 at 14:12

Tags Poem  Love  Kill 

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2008-11-17


Rob Graber
"For never was a tale of greater woe
Than this of Angely and her Ricardo"

(Paraphrase of the end of "Romeo and Juliet")

Entertaining!
2008-09-17


Karl-Johan
I don't buy it. Sorry but it's not believable and since it's not it doesn't make me feel anything.
2008-09-15



lol this was sweet and funny and tragic all in perfect patromony! lol Sad? lol no....Ironically like life? and Romeo and Juliet, or Jack and Jill? Yes....smiling at you, Tai
2008-09-15


Maxway
So beauty!!! romeo and julio true!
2008-06-18


Lea Foverskov
OMG! This is depressing, so sad, and also beautiful. Romeo and Juliet all over in a modern version!

-Lea
2008-04-01