I Can See

That Look In Your Eyes
I've Seen It All Before
Wasn't It Not So Long Ago ?
You Told Me All Those Lies

I Can See That
That Nothing Has Changed
Isn't It Strange ?
How When Where
You Don't Care !

Well I Still Hope
That Road You Take
Gets To Where You Are ..
I Hope That Journey You Make
Ends Up Not Far .........

Poetry by GB
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Written on 2006-01-03 at 01:36

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Amanda K
wonderful sad piece.provoking a big question shows care.

Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done GB! straight to the point with no bullshit. I like your capitals on each word , it adds more emphasis to each one.
"How When Where" lovely string of words.
loadsaluv esti

I like this one...beautiful in a caring way for someone who did wrong

liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm thinking this could be a song
Pet Shop style [think what have I done to
deserve this and west end girls.]
Love your poetry.

The look in the eyes tells it and says it all, either good or foreboding, well done