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Empty promises.
Regretted words.
The flames turn to ashes,
And the days turn to nights
As the blood is spewed
By the stake you drove through my heart.



Poetry by lexie
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Written on 2008-05-07 at 03:06

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amandeep
this sound better...nice..sad poem ..you told what you wanted to tell, or what was in your heart..nicely done..I must say i am reading poems like this second time...

empty promises- i hope that they will cometrue
Regretted words- will be forgiven soon
ashes--they mixed with soil to sow a new seed of love
Days- are brighter and Nights are Cool
Blood spewed--No more Pain


what i feel i wrote...

but nice poem..
Well done

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Amandeep
2008-05-07