Good God.


Illuminate [darkened]

Shaking [around me].
Tensing [all muscles].
Releasing [all emotion].
Screaming [LOUDLY].
Breathing [has ceased].
I can't help it [I no longer exist].
Fingers grip [my pale throat].
Body pressed against [my soft corpse].
Gasp, gasp, gasp [it all fails].

And when my soul floats to Heaven I know it will be rejected by God, sitting upon a golden stool.
The angels will look down on me like all the others always have.
And I will be punished, sent down to surrender to Satan.
Attempt to drown my immortal self in my sins, sleeping in the depths of dark wet caves where not even a fire can live brightly.
The Devil himself will sneak into my midst, he'll crawl along dirty, dusty, muddy grounds, press a long nail under my chin, lift, and breathe in my scent.
And he too will reject me.



Poetry by kaytee
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Written on 2008-05-21 at 02:31

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You have a very powerful gift. Your poems, especially this one, sound almost visionary--they remind me of some of William Blake's. At the risk of sounding trite, I've discovered over the years that I can't control what others think of me, be they gods or human beings or devils. The only thing I can do is to try to care for and look after myself.
2009-05-24


Cr4Ky
i hope i won`t go anywhere.. i`d rather just float around in this world looking at the people in the streets without them looking at me.. and sometimes do a prank or two:)

This write is dark and powerful and i can feel the depth of how far you belive your rejection goes.. it drives me mad that the world could possibly do that.. but what do i know, right?
anyhow. remarkable good text and i liked it, like the mood of your text.

Sincerely
Øystein
2008-05-21


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Good poem, powerful and dark

Elle x
2008-05-21


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
well writan , Kaytee , chill out, with us on ''the bay , '' as Stan , says , you among freinds hear , we exsept , we dont rejeckt , if I had taken up the reigen , that were chosan fore me , I'd have preist doing 12 hrs shifts , 7 24 , thead be a pile of stones dwarfing mount everest , me underneath , still a lot to ''cvonfes'' , '' let those with out sin , throw the 1st stone '' , be your self be who you are , as for those who dfesar too judge , well , I say those who point the finger , and showt the loudist , are hiding the reil and grater sins.

Welcome too poetbay , Kaytee ,

KenD Williams ( THE DYSLIXIC POET )
2008-05-21


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Well Kaytee...to hell with the Devil....The folk at
PoetBay will not reject you...
I enjoyed reading the poem...just take it easy on yourself

xxxx Stan
2008-05-21