Again, need corrections and tips.


Triple Goddess

I wander out into the dark and cold
Death reigns here, or so 'tis told
But mother goddess walks with me
And thus I know I'll always be

I look around, and nothing see
Oh mother great, ne'er leave me be
Take my hand, lead the way
Lead me there so I sha'nt stray

Life 'tis fragile, cold and blue
But ne'er did I feel a love more true
The mothers touch is warm and soft
Lifts my spirit high aloft

Maiden, mother, crone
Ye willst ne'er leave me alone
Lover of life mother of all
Listen to my humble call

Bless my soul and grant me joy
Keep me safe from harmful ploy
Lend me a glance from up above
Lend me wisdom, learn me love



Poetry by Sylvian
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Written on 2006-01-11 at 12:18

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Sylvian
Thank you.
2006-01-11


Black Knight
Not bad, really...
2006-01-11


Sylvian
Thank you. Nice to see that some people like my poor attempt at a classic poem.
2006-01-11


Zoya Zaidi
A mother godess always
looks down at you,
From above she cares
For you, whether you know
it or not, she fights every
battle for you,'cause she is the
Mother Godess for you!!!!
Avery good attempt at a very propfound thought and subject!!!
WELL DONE!!! SYLVIAN!
A very warm welcome to the bay!!!
xxx, Zoya
2006-01-11


Sylvian
Thank you.
2006-01-11


Sylvian
Thank you, and thank you.
Always nice to be appreciated and welcomed.
2006-01-11


penfold18
Not to many to pick in this the flow and content are both very good well done and welcome to the bay :-)
2006-01-11