*Aum* ?* . . . The Audacity of Hope!


Come on honey, come on my darling!
Come on and dance with me!
Forget yourself for a
moment and be my elf!
Just for tonight, allow me to see
your smile. Open up the hidden heaven
in your eyes, touch my laugh lines!

For me
For you
that is


Let's unite and become the giant!
The winged giant! Sing for me!
Make my heart vibrate to your rhythm!
Give me a fair chance to fly with you!


Oh my darling! Oh my honey!
Lets us be like the lightning bolt
and the rumbling ground!

Right here!
Right now
 . .
Unspoken dreams
never seize to exist
when Border Rivers
To - night
((( inside this crater )))
this audacity
be tolerated
It's us
who dream
can't you see?


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Written on 2008-08-24 at 12:13

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
lol smiles thank you Carmen :)))))))

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
You have a wonderful, soft ethereal style - I love your poetry - but I wonder and no offence because I am of the opinion that one should only comment on poetry that draw us in - you say one thing, then act on another - I like questions, it is the only way to find out things :)

Elle x

Phyllis J. Rhodes
I immediately thought of the song title "Dream Lover" sung by Bobby Darrin about a million years ago. One line says "...I want a dream lover so I don't have to dream alone."
This lovely poem reads like a dream one remembers in detail when awakened. It has excitement and romance in an artistic form that makes reading it so pleasurable.

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
you give a lift of spirit with each text. Your poetry leaves me smiling. Whether it be from message or from the artistic display of each line and form, it is uplifting and filled with marvelous imagery. xo kathy : D

Stan Cooper
I hope you found your lightning bolt

beautiful thoughtful poem

xxx Stan