Vortex of Despair

When you've got
That sinking feeling
That your life,
Is upside down

You feel
Your world's slipped it's axis,
And control
Cannot be found

When your soul
Has lost it's meaning
And your smile's
Become a frown

Have no fear,
You're simply caught
Within the
Vortex of despair


By Dee Daffodil June 13th,2006 ****Thanks... to a very good friend !! ****



Poetry by Dee Daffodil
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Written on 2008-10-06 at 04:43

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ngaio Beck
An excellent portrayal of despair and consequence. I don't understand despair,but this helps to put verbal graphic to it'
2008-11-21


Dave Glavin
And it's one hell of a vortex
2008-10-18