Inspired by Kathy's poem A Wonderful Man


Heart Like November (3 Stanza Haiku)

Heart like November
naked and cold turning gray
Love's flow cut till Spring

Life's flow cut till love
still, gray heart waits for Springtime
April blooms, love flows

Life and love heal hearts
death cannot kill memories
love, memories, life






Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2008-11-21 at 16:56

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love is forevery living in ones heart. A beautiful inspired piece of love warmed with collective hearts of who you care about and love.
2009-01-05


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2008-12-06


John Lambremont, Sr.
This works nicely overall. The first and third verses are terrific. The second needs reworking, I think.

"Heart like November" is a great line, and would make a great song title. Bob, where are you?
2008-11-21