3 Haikus


Hybernation Calls, November Pounces, A Day For Lovers

My heart feels winter
Sadness I don't understand
Hybernation calls



Dead leaves skitter by
running from the cold winds' blast
November pounces



A blue cold hovers
A white dust covers the ground
A day for lovers




Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2008-11-21 at 17:22

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well I found this one a beauty and I am glad that it wasn't hidden in hibernation not to be found. Love the nature and leaves in this piece of winter chill.
2009-01-05


normalil
Very descriptive. A day for lovers only if they cuddle up close!
2008-11-21


John Lambremont, Sr.
The second one is killer.

Suggest "no day for lovers" as last line of #3.
2008-11-21