The Feeling

Along the coast,

The waves so blue and full of beauty,

Looking out into the horizon,

No thoughts or worries,

Just you and the horizon,

You and the world,

Never wanting to look in any other direction,

Nothing but pure air and life,

No sign of hate, depression or desperation,

Just smiling,


The best feeling in a long time..



Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2008-12-18 at 13:20

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Your poem certainly has an amazing feeling to it. Starting every line with capital letters I don't like however, ruins the flow.
2008-12-18


normalil
I think that good feeling comes to most of us when contemplating the wondrous ocean. Like the feeling your poem gave me.
2008-12-18


normalil
I think that good feeling comes to most of us when contemplating the wondrous ocean. Like the feeling your poem gave me.
2008-12-18