My best friend lost his younger brother last week... at the age of 15 he commited suicide.. a horrible thing that`ll haunt my friend for the rest of his life.. so i wrote this to let him know how much i care for him..

I just hope he`ll be alright somed



You are the stronger one (My friend)

there`s to little i can do
but to call you every night
tell you that i care
and hope you`ll be allright

Sing a song of happiness
and tell the world i know
that you will be alright tonight
as you`re out there in the snow

i know the fear you have inside
the fear to carry on
but you`ll be alright tonight
and i can sing my song

my freind the loss is hard on you
i know that you`re in pain
cause seeing what your eyes have seen
will show it self again

i know that you are tired now
that you have lost your faith
in God, in life, in family
but i know you`re bound to stay

because you are the stronger one
the one i know as friend
the one that gives the sun a smile
as you will rise again

and i`ll sing a song of happiness
and tell the world i know
that you will be alright tonight
as you`re out there in the snow




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-01-24 at 23:36

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Veld Cooper
Your troubled heart reflects concern for a friend whose heart is broken - this is right and noble and he is lucky to have you to rely on! Find the strength from somewhere to continue supporting him, as healing is a far slower process than most people realise. My thoughts are with you.
2006-01-25



Most of us here and in this day and age have similar experiences to your friend or have a friend to which such personal tragedy has transformed their world. It is not always easy to go through such but we do the best with what we hold in our hearts. Sometimes that 'someday' seems like forever. But being there for your friend is the best thing you can ever do. He is so lucky to have you.
2006-01-25


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
it is sad to hear about your friend's brother.
This is a very emotional write that brought tears to my eyes reading it.
Liz
2006-01-25


Marie
I'm sorry to hear about your best friend's brother...I hope you will always be there to lift him up.
2006-01-25