I probably write the shortest poems you've ever read.


crack.

Break me before I break myself.

With icy eyes that cut like knives,
Just a single stare is a hard stab.

I'm cracked.

And with just one more glance,

I'll shatter.



Poetry by kaytee
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Written on 2009-01-08 at 03:23

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mmm what a juicy piece and after all isn't that where we get the succulent juices when we slice the meat? Well only in food for thought. I really like this because it relates to point of views of others especially when it turns nasty. I guess people do not always know how to relate, including myself. I like how you are direct and to the point without to much waffle.
2009-01-08


melanie sue
Oh, I feel every oblique cutting piece...the words are piercing.
This is very well crafted and evokes strong emotion.
2009-01-08