"And dont you dare try to fix me."


Layla.

How can ink, paper and lead be used to pass on these words, these thoughts.
Pictures in my mind, they form and refuse to leave.
Maybe they would, maybe they could, if I ever wanted them to.
Love is the most thrown around word.
I dont want to throw anything, I dont know what to say.

My words have gone
So I'll use it, as its there.
I love you
And dont you dare try to fix me.
Better broken by you
Than left whole by anyone else.




With love,
Layla x




Poetry by gemma
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Written on 2009-01-13 at 19:27

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I like this very much, this is really special, heart felt words, a letter of love. Well done.
2009-01-13


Bob The PoetBay support member heart!
Dear Leyla, I like your poem, however I have a few suggestions as shown in my rerite bleow:

Layla.
How can key, mouse and electricity
Be used to pass on these words, these thoughts.
Pictures in my mind form
And refuse to leave.
Maybe they would, maybe they could,
If I ever wanted them to.

Love is the most thrown around word.
I donít want to throw anything;
I donít know what to say.

My words have gone
So I'll use it, as its there.
I love you
And donít you dare try to fix me.
Better broken by you
Than left whole by anyone else.
2009-01-13