Some thoughts.




The Cycle


when freedom comes

will you stop laughing
knowing I won't betray
the forgiveness

can I feel the peace
of being spoken of softly
through all we have done
like no others have

if a crack reappears
may it be you won't say
a miserable fool
I expected it so

can you see that past
love the grey that was us
and learn
as I now do

will I be like before
a hatch that is closed
from an ease
that won't kill the cycle

when freedom comes





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-01-25 at 15:49

Tags Forgiveness  Relationships  Love 

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A never ending circle of loves coolest breeze hitting us where it hurts the most, lovely of course, smiling at you, Tai

Language: 5
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2009-01-25