The child I can't remember

You're the child I can't remember.
You're the child I can't forget.
You're the pain I can't get rid of.
You're the sadness in my chest.

Lead my way and I'll follow thee.
I'll lead your way and you will see.
Memories of aching blue
can turn into something true.

Lay down beside me and rest your heart.
I'll take your hand, we'll never part.
Cause I am you and you are me
and all along we couldn't see.

Things we can't remember and things we can't forget.
It's hard to be a sorrow, hard to take a breath.
Close the circle, find the child
and you will find peace of mind.

You're the pain I can't get rid of.
You're the sadness in my chest.
You're the child I can't remember.
You're the child I can't forget.




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-01-29 at 01:06

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amandeep
amzing. and the best........
2007-05-06


Arti
Beautiful write... It haunts me..

"you're the child I cant remember
you're the child I cant forget"
2007-01-10


PoeticProcrastination
"You're the pain I can't get rid of.
You're the sadness in my chest.
You're the child I can't remember.
You're the child I can't forget."
I love this refrain...wow. I agree, this ought to be a song. What a beautiful write!
2006-02-06


Andy
amazing... wow.
2006-02-04


Inked.
Beautiful...
2006-01-30


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
such moving words.
I think you should put this to music as a love song.
*BOOKMARKED*
2006-01-30


Marie
"You're the child I can't remember.
You're the child I can't forget. "

Oh, i love that...may you find the child and cope
2006-01-29


penfold18
This has that sad haunting quality about it, very well written indeed :-)
2006-01-29


Zoya Zaidi
Embrace the child in you!
Come to terms with it!
Let it take hold of you!
Lead you into unkown of self,
And be your companion true!

Exorcise you demons of past,
It makes the heart heal fast!

(((((Hugs Dan)))))

Need less to say your hybernation has proved sooo fruitful!!!!

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-01-29


Morpheus
Many people fight their way through their lives, looking for the simple times of childhood. This is a good description of their journey. Good stuff!
2006-01-29


GB
Hi ! ... Like this one ... good flow of words .
Good read ! ....... Glen ( GB )
2006-01-29