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Early Morning Reverie

She will leave the warm embrace of
his bed, pull a t-shirt on to cover
and walk with silent feet across
the hard wooden floors while he,
adjusted to sudden space will move
and fling an arm across the now
vacant warmth of their bed.

She likes that time to herself
to watch the water from the
balcony, as spring ducks dive
hopeful ever for that last crumb
and numb feet now impervious
to the cold, dew wet concrete.

She likes to watch the early risers
pedalling along the paths, expending
energy, blowing stress in vapour breaths
as forbidden smokers huddle, casting
furtive looks and belching out their
fumes like old factory chimneys to weld
in amongst the grey skies of solitary morn.

Sounds fill her as the air chills
her narrowed gaze deep upon
dark opaque waters that relentlessly
carve a path to their distant dreams
singing songs of long wayward journeys.

She won't move now until she feels
a warm hand touch her nape
and sleepy eyes beckon her from
this cold and lonely stance and such
a glance is as warming to her
as the bed she left a while ago.

They will sit with doors open
gently communicating through
the lapping water, until its sated
rhythm calls. Then unspoken
they'll take Sunday back to bed
and let the river run its course.




Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-04-02 at 13:18

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Sid Gardner
Magical poetry and expertly presented.
Sid
2009-04-03



Beautiful! The last lines wrap it up quite nicely.
I'd love to take Sundays back to bed - especially since working on the weekends has taken that luxury away for good.
2009-04-03


TonyD
I don't know what else to say... utterly beautiful!
2009-04-02


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Delightful...
2009-04-02



I think this is one of the best of yours I've read. I especially like the sharp contrast of the healthy joggers and the furtive smokers. I'm a morning person myself and usually write my best poetry then. Very satisfactory ending for the poem also, with the river flowing toward its destination as our lives go on.
2009-04-02


Brian Oarr
What an extraordinary piece of writing. I marvel at how easily the femine mind can say things like this so beautifully, so facilely. --- That, and did I mention how jealous I am of that guy who gets to spend such languid Sundays?
2009-04-02