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The End

The sky turns black
the trees turn grey
The sun goes out
its final ray
The earth is dark
and Doom appears
Shedding nothing
but bloody tears
All life stops
and goes out
Silence prevails
but one shout
"The pain you cause
is the pain you earn.
No going back
no place to turn!"
These last words
hang in the air
And no more is heard
anywhere...



Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-02-01 at 01:35

Tags Doom  End  Earth 

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PoeticProcrastination
I agree with Inked. and Mary; this poem is brilliant, and the rhyming is natural and perfect. Great job!! ::::}
2006-02-01


Inked.
I totally agree with Mary.

Usually I have a problem with rhyming poems, because they tend to ... not rhyme ... but you did an amazing job of actually MAKING it rhyme and keeping up the tempo.

Well done.
2006-02-01


Mary
good god! that was brilliant!!
2006-02-01