I Sent You Away

I cannot say why suddenly
Within one heartbeat
It felt right to give you up-
Perhaps we supped too fast
And deep and the entwining
Unravelled my ardour.
Now as I ponder your unscathed cheek
Coupled with my dancing feet
Your odour is scented away.



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-05-21 at 23:48

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George Gere
there should be an 'until' before the 'the' in my comment....."until the...line"..
2009-05-21


George Gere
It seemed to be the usual the "scented away" line(in relation to the title) made it something. nice.
2009-05-21