Still haven't put up anything I've written in the last 2-3 weeks, but I guess I just made this account so I can't really be blamed for just putting out my old stuff and 'catching up' or something...
Sure this isn't the best, but its still here.


Time

Time, Future, Past, Present,
such are the realms of men.

A step forwards? A step backwards?
Make the mistake again.

Learning, unlearning, relearn unchanging.
Will the wise die? when?

Time, Future, Past, Present,
to the end, awful end.



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-02-03 at 04:14

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Amanda K
Though now matter wut we do in life the end is waiting us somewhere, yet we can choose the end(good or bad) ?????
2006-06-16


IronicBanana
Ouch! Headache, too much thinking! Not that the poem was bad, quite the opposite, in fact! I loved it! The rhyme scheme (or however you spell it) was really good! I also really liked the format... you definitely have alot of talent! Alot more than me, anyway...
2006-02-08


Mary
well she took all the good stuff to say so i'll just back it up with "that was really cool!" kinda pathetic but true! and i'm ready to defent that post if need be! :P :D
2006-02-03


PoeticProcrastination
The end need not be awful. But until it comes, it is up to us what we do with our time; if the wise die, we must do our best to take their places, to learn from them.
Great write, very insightful!
2006-02-03