I am really amazed that people really care
because their words hold truth -
in times of need they really are there. -


A failing kind heart restarted.

O' you saved this tortured soul
when it had been forsakened,
You restored hope that had been fading -
that almost had been lost -
a failed kind heart now restarted.

You heard the silent tears
and doved head first into my internal lake
[to try to save me]
thankyou for being there
I know now your words weren't fake.

Encroaching darkness
your beautiful sun expelled
Although it came from far away...

..You were not too late to help.

05/02/06






Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-02-05 at 09:10

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Veld Cooper
STUNNING!
2006-02-06


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Life is a bitch but it's better than the alternative that's for sure. It would be such a waste if poetbay lost your smile. I am new here but i can tell you have many friends on these pages who care.
2006-02-05


GB
Hi ! ... Won't go on ... but agree with what ZOYA says ..... all the best ! .... Glen ( GB )
P S ..... Good piece here too by the way !!!
2006-02-05


Zoya Zaidi
Lizzy, Lizzy, Lizzy!
Never feel forsaken,
'Cause that is not true,
When you reach out to others,
They reach out to you!
That yours is a kind heart-
That is always there,
For those who need you-
And they know that you care;
So when you are down, you count on me,
'Cause like me there are others,
Who care for thee...!

((((((hugs dear Lizzy))))

I care for you!

Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-02-05


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Thankyou everyone
for your comments on
'When the kind heart fails, who will come'
Liz.
2006-02-05