*My mom isn't doing so well physically and it contributes to my falling into down moods, therefore the melancholic poems. It'll pass.


Drop

The sounds of pinecones drop,
lost to songbird twitter.

The Garden's fragrances
bloom among fresh lit charcoal.

The smell of the grill
is lost to the feel
of youthful laughter
and Marco Polo splashes
misting memories in the face.

She lays them all down to sleep
as the night befalls upon
soft beds of dead silence.

Camped under a canopy of stars,
She hears the pinecones drop
and scans the sky for meteors.

Calmly, she closes her eyes,
and waits for one more sunrise.

But deaf is the Dawn
to the rooster's loud crow.

And the sound of a pinecone dropping
is lost to the songbird's twitter.





Poetry by melanie sue
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Written on 2009-06-29 at 03:28

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Charlie
Oh my goodness, what a beautiful poem! Charlie
2009-08-07


Chris Fernie
Dear melanie sue,

This is a noble and heroic poem which I shall keep as a hard copy.


Regards, Chris
2009-06-29


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
mothers are special.
especially when they have children who understand them...
as usual i enjoy your style...its very immediate
2009-06-29