here what i say ,its so easy to live among people laughing ,doing what they want you to do
but at some point i just feel so sick and i take away the mask
and i say
what i want about the past


my first poem ,please read it carefully

Before a year what I was
And today what I m
And between
What did change?
Love, hate
Or I don't feel anymore
I skip tears to cry seas
I runaway from hours to live seconds
And I m still here
Nothing is there but you
I don't love you anymore
I m fed up of love
I m fed up of seeing you everyay
As a ghost
That hunts me over nights
Will you ever be mine?
I don't want even if you are now
Dead don't need to eat
Dead needs nothing to drink
Before a year
I was there
Waiting ,crying so hard for you
I was running like a crazy to catch your fingers
And now
I say
That shadows live in nowhere like me




Poetry by HUDA
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Written on 2009-07-15 at 00:32

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Amy Valentina
Well, it is a beautiful first poem... May be the incidents made u a poet... When I wrote poems in School, my friends esp. boys made fun of me... it was then that my English teacher told a boy that a time will come when u will write poems...
And true enough.. he fell in love ... had a heart break and then ... became a poet...
I dont mean any offense , dont take me otherwise.. all I want to say is: Poems are a wonderful way of pouring your heart out when u feel no one is ever gonna listen to u... and amazingly, its through poems that u r heard the most...

Keep writing,
LOL,
Amy
2009-08-08


SAROJ KHAN
try to improve more ,ok
2009-07-28


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
So sad, and painful. What a wonderful first poem!
luvestix
2009-07-19


Kathy Lockhart
your very first poem expresses your anguish so deeply that I felt the familiar gnawing pain of lost love physically inside myself.

Keep writing and sharing here. Welcome to Poetbay. : ) kathy
2009-07-15