mmmm...Not sure what this is about

~L.~



Esoteric Minority



Asymptomatic sorrow cascades
into murky pools of mirthlessness,
it's depths esoteric to the sighted minority
as the majority stand in blind circles,
hoping their pain will fade into oblivion
as they environ with the
esoteric masses of knowledge
and wish their eyes
were again closed.

26/07/09




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-07-26 at 08:58

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Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
"Esoteric" has always been a favourite word of mine! :-)
2009-08-17



It nevertheless makes a striking image!
2009-07-27


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
that's what i get from it, anyway.
2009-07-27


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
hmm... i think it's about mysticism.
2009-07-27



Beautiful write here liz! The first line is a beauty and rolls off the tongue...but those mirky pools are clearer now, communication is everything, is what this is all about.

Glorious word, in beautiful verse.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-07-26