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Oh! Flowers take me far away,
Oh! Stars and moon cover me up.
Turn off those love songs,
Turn off everything that reminds me of you.
Me all alone in this crowded city,
But noise can't disturb me.
Even in this solitaire forest heart is not calm.
There's no peace on the hills and in the woods,
There's no any such place which doesn't reminds me of you.
I might escape away from this world, from you I can't.
All in scare this heart wanted to fly,
But it won't get salvation.
Even in dreams there's no peace,
That's why take me far away, thou flowers.
Cover me up, thou stars and moon.
Turn off those love songs,
Turn off everything that reminds me of you.




Poetry by Zalan
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Written on 2009-08-20 at 10:59

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Missing someone you love is the hardest feeling to go through
I understand what you pen,and in time,it does get easier but when? Time only knows,and that,could be a life time
(((((hugs))))

cyndi
2009-08-21


Amar Gurung
hi jalan,nice piece...missing helplessly someone?
2009-08-20