...sometimes when you sit to think and your mind feels clogged up, so uncomfortable, highly irritable you are and seemingly not so sane...


...Lost...

Lost,
Dissilussioned
Each moment counting for nothing
Mind wavering
A bashing of empty thoughts
Lost, in a world of my own

Shifty,
Shifty Me
Unable to maintain one train of thought
Somewhat crazy, somewhat lazy
knowing not whether to think or not
Lost, in a hell of some sot

Feelings,
Actually, no feelings
Just a perpetual emptiness
No, not happiness
Nothing much to gloat over
Lost, in an abyss dark and hollow

Confused,
Perhaps i lost myself
No longer knowing who I am
A mystery to me I have become
As though drowning in waters deep
Lost, I seem to have lost it.



Poetry by kip
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Written on 2006-02-10 at 15:29

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Amanda K
a sense of loss, losing the track. i didn get it well though written in a fine way,,,,.,.,.


cheers,
Amanda
2006-06-21


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Have you been walking around inside my head? so brillantly described.
2006-02-20


boy
I hear you!
I identify with this.
Nice piece.
2006-02-15


Natalie
"Lost, in an abyss dark and hollow"
Yeah, I know this feeling..
2006-02-11