Inspired by DayBreakers poem 'the flickering dark'

Read it with anger, like you mean it.


The necromancer dances in

what is this shifting amorphic stealer of memories who only has one hand of cards to play?

come sit at my table you arrogant sod
let's see the colour of your blood
you despicable feign of a god

oh yeah - i'm shouting at you
you black dark miserable piece of nothing

come on - bring it on!

you've suckled from my veins too long

poisoned the spring well of my life

but do you notice something - shithead

i'm still standing
and i'm still up for the fight

so come on - bring in on!
give me all you got

if you win this time - good luck
in hell we will meet
and i'll spit on the rot
of your bones.

I defy you
I deny you
I will not slip away unnoticed

YOU WILL NOT TAKE ME DOWN ALONE.


© Rik - 01/02/2006



Poetry by Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-02-12 at 16:50

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BlueyedSoul
I hear this loud and clear...i have also shouted at this enemy and vowed no matter the misery he inflicts on my soul and upon my life i will not give up, i will not be bitter...no i will stand again and feel the sun on my face and smile!

Excellent write Rik.

~BlueyedSoul
2006-03-14


inkedfingers
The seething angst was evident in this piece or at least to me. These are the two lines that really stuck out for me:

'you've suckled from my veins too long

poisoned the spring well of my life'

Very well written!
2006-02-14


Zoya Zaidi
What a woder ful way to give vent to your feelings!
Loved every word of it !

Bravo! Rik!

(((hugs)))

xxx, Zoya
2006-02-13


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
LOVE IT!LOVEIT!LOVEIT!
reminds me of my 2002 poems [not yet posted]
such anger i love this poem
liz.
ps did i mention i bookmarked it and that i love it?
2006-02-13



Feels as liberating to read it as it must have felt to write it!
2006-02-12


Marie
"I defy you
I deny you
I will not slip away unnoticed"

Haha! I love it! It's like a f*ck you right to the face. :) That's what you gotta do with spirits anyway...as I read once "YOU are the one with the body. YOU have to be in control."
2006-02-12