Tanka


‘End of Love’

In a sea of tears
Falling shards of shattered glass
Once her beating heart

As he spoke those final words
His tongue was a burnished sword




Poetry by Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-15 at 04:07

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John Ashleigh
A really truthfull peice of prose - considering the utter despair that you put across, the mood just elevates the whole peice. Thankyou for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2010-11-22


Rob Graber
Great meter and alliteration here; this really conveys a sense of devastation.
2009-10-15