Knowing was is fake is real is a great deal


figuratively literal

speaking reality
Spoken words are taken literally
Forget though as if figuratively
words spoken by u and me
So figuratively we
Talk so literally I'm guessing u took that mistakenly
Fondling the sickly
Disease that discreetly
Annihilates you and knowingly me



Poetry by cory Crook
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Written on 2009-11-28 at 04:05

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good riming there.. :) get the reader (in this case moi), to think about all the consequences of the spoken word there might be..and how hard it sometimes is to be understood in the right way... yeah, sometimes it's really complicated, relations between people, indeed.. applause of course !
2009-12-05



Yes, knowing what is fake makes life purposeful. I enjoyed your calculative evaluation.
2009-11-28