Had the 1st line for a while,
finally added to it :)

My 1st poem for 2010

~L.~


Broken Sunsets, Bleeding Colour.



Broken sunset, bleeding colours
of the torn and ravaged heart,

Bleeding colour, broken sun sets
jaggedly fade to black shades of grey,

Betrayed, exploited, innocent heart,
kaleidoscope of dreams, now a
broken sunset bleeding colour.

09/01/2010.



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-01-09 at 11:29

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nature
wow great expression
2010-01-25


Mr.Mist
Hey, Liz!

A strong poem to start of the year with..but also a good one. Liked it in a strange way..hehe..espesially the line "kaleidoscope of dreams"...

Big hug,

Mr.M
2010-01-23


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Liz...If this first poem of yours of 2010 is an indication
of what's to come from you the rest of the year, we're all in for
a great New Year

xxx Stan
2010-01-09