one of the best days of my life was today.. just thought i'd share. [:




You, Me and the Rain

Clouds build up themselves

Making them look tougher then the others,

But only end up crying their tears,

Onto you and me today.

 

I walk with you; side by side.

Hair and clothes soaked right through

I see the droplets of rain on your face.

How I wish I could kiss them away.

 

Not noticing how my converse shoes are dark with mud.

Not glancing at the fact that I might catch a cold

Just standing there for an hour makes me oblivious

To everything but you. 

 

I watch your every movement, and listen to your every word.

I need to memorize this moment in its orginial form,

Not wanting my mind adding it's 2 cents into it.

I want to memorize you.

 

Because maybe one day, you wont be there.

This could have been the last time I saw you.

But I'll still have the memory of you, me and the rain.

And I'll still have the warm fuzzy sweater you gave me before we departed. 

 

 





Poetry by Zoey xX
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Written on 2010-02-12 at 01:18

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Kat
you explain this so well, i could almost see you and feel the emotions
2010-02-12


CC
beautifully written. The way you end your stanzas is magical. Maybe review the start of the poem, cannot pinpoint it but the choice of words or perhaps grammar feels unnatural. Other than that I really enjoyed this poem
2010-02-12