TOUCH MY HEART

Touch my heart and you will see,
better days will come, will be.
Let me breathe life into you,
the strongest of strength, honest and true.

We'll find a place which demons can't find.
A state of mind - an exceptional kind.
We'll build us a home of trust and respect,
where storms and defeat are not to expect.

I live in you, and you live in me.
What a perfect, little place to be.
The air is so clean, the grass perfect green.
This world of serene, rare and unseen.

So touch my heart and you will see,
a world of beauty will come, will be.
Breathe life into me, and I'll give some to you.
Life becomes perfect with such a beautiful view.





Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-02-23 at 01:39

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
What a wonderful place that would be, peace, harmony and stillness. A wonderful thought brilliantly woven.
2006-02-23


Malin Johansson
This poem was very beautiful!!!
tooked my breath away, to be swept away into your pictures in your poem!!!

// Malin
2006-02-23


penfold18
DB this is excellent work my friend,there is a calming beauty to it, a serenity all of its own well done :-)
2006-02-23


Zoya Zaidi
Whenever I read your texts dear breaker,
It breaks my heart , it elates me, it touches me,
Deep down there somewhere,
In the depth of my very being,
I can't really say, what it is,
But it touches me deeply still!
May you will spell it out,
May be you will tell me, daer friend,
What is it?

(((hugs for bringing out the me, in me))))

love, Danny!
xxx, Zoya
2006-02-23


Morpheus
""I live in you, and you live in me.
What a perfect, little place to be.""

Someplace we all need to be.

This is beautiful, and alive, and so real. Thank you.
2006-02-23