Idk, some of this is truth, some of it is totally made up. Most of it just doesn't make sense.


Rain just has that way with me

it rained today, and nobody really seemed
pleased except me, because rain has that way with me

and so I was going to use today to say to you that i don't know
frankly, where all my questions come from

but i love you, so that's beyond the point.

anyway, I could and should be frustrated
but am just too happy.

and I love all of you
(even though at the same time I am sick of everything)
but I think that's expected.

rain just has that way with me.




Poetry by bluebackpack
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Written on 2010-03-13 at 00:31

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I agree with Cowboy Jim's comment that the title sounds like a great chorus verse for a song. I love rain and would probably be happy in places like the Pacific Northwest or the rain forest, where it rains all the time. Enjoyed the poem.
2010-03-13



The title and the poem have the makings of a great song. As is, it's a great poem, it has it all: love & life!
2010-03-13