hmmm...NO idea what inspired this??? lol

~L.~


Of



Time filled years,
years of wasted tears,
tears portraying hidden fears,
fears of pain from judgemental peers.

01/07/10



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-07-01 at 12:44

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Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
nice rhymes!
2010-07-02


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Liz...enjoyed the read, but can I offer one, hopefully, constructive change?..."tears betraying hidden fears,"

Wouldn't "tears portraying hidden fears" be better?

xxx Stan
2010-07-02