When love permeats the mind and another soul makes it fly in beatiful thoughts full of expectations sweet, we can see only light all around !


My star on the altar of love!

When eyes meet
The thoughts sweet
Like rain clouds with
air so cool fly sky high!

When words sweet meet
The rich poetry of love
likeflowers , showers of
kisses and hugs overwhelm!
None can stop this nor refuse!
Acceptance is love ,
Love is acceptance
When love knocks two hearts
Beating in rhithm accidental!

I too have fallen in love
with truth in word and beauty!
Sensitve she is like a flower
color and fragrance competing!
Wise in thoughts, passionate in love!
Even in whispers in love
A word short nor a word more,
She says with brevity to
Ignite the love flame in me!

She is a bright star on
the altar of love that is unique!




Poetry by c g shankar
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Written on 2006-03-05 at 15:34

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Malin Johansson
Very sweet poem!!!
2006-03-06


Jen
Great poem - I love how you gave her life in the poem. Very great! :)
2006-03-06


kip
...love adrenaline i would have called this well conjured piece that so vividly describes the rush there is in a heart that's clearly overwhelme by love...lovely write...
2006-03-06


BlueyedSoul
Such a beauiful description of your love. You write with such passion. A very lovely poem cg

~BlueyedSoul
2006-03-06


Zoya Zaidi
A bright star on the alter of love,
Will parish, before it can breathe,
The very first breath of love,
A fallen star, have you seen ever?
It shines a last time, before
It perishes, into the black oblivion
Of sky, disintegrates, slowly
And disperses in firmament blue
And high, gradually, slowly, surely...

((Hugs dear Shankar, I don't know why?))
(((Your poem evoked, this feeling blue!)))
(((((((((I do not mean to scare you!)))))))))
((((((((All the best, in your love, to you!))))

love,xxx, Zoya
2006-03-05


Teala
She sounds lovely, CG--great job!
2006-03-05