There are places and times where "what is" is only "what was" and to come across them is to rediscover some part of yourself that you had thought lost.


Relativity

Time and space being relative,
Here each seems to have ended
Where a fence leans into nothing,

Keeping nothing in nor out now,
Whatever once here having gone
The way of the barn, its bare bones

Leaning too in a pasture wild
With tall weeds and prairie grass,
Old seed bags folded with frost.

The fence staggers on and then
Simply stops, limping wires rusty
And the posts more holding on

Than holding up, as though
They had forgotten where it was
They had been going and why.

Such emptiness no longer seems
A place but a permanent past,
Dimension beyond any measuring.

But between a fence post and wire
A spider web holds them together
And from it, a single thin thread

From which hangs a white moth,
Desiccated body slowly swinging
Like a pendulum, its hollow husk

A tiny ticking against a milkweed
Pod like a clock running down,
Time and space being relative.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2010-10-30 at 16:59

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melanie sue
This is excellent. I am glad I got curious and came over to read some. I really really love this. Thanks for sharing your gift of writing with us. :)
2011-06-01


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations! Simple, clear, factual and ethereal
simultaneously. The scene, the moment and the pondering all beautifully painted .

Great stuff!

Joe
2010-11-10


shells
I echo what Jim said, a pleasure. I loved your observations and the "quietness" of the piece.
2010-10-31



Gosh. This is manna. The way it begins large, the rural setting, then narrows continually to the essence, back to the essence of time and space. Just a beautiful exploration, the kind that comes from knowing a place intimately. There is no fiction here I'm betting.

A pleasure.

jim
2010-10-30