John Hollander wrote a series of 169 poems (13 x 13) called "Powers of Thirteen" in which each poem was thirteen lines, each line thirteen syllables. I had to try it and thought that the rather obvious theme of music (the chromatic scale) would be easy


Chromatic

On a scale of one to thirteen, any given day
Touches each note, some heard, some seen and some only felt
In the measured playing of white light and black shadows,
The crescendos and diminuendos of birdsongs
At the edge of where the woods rise up from fallow fields
And chords of chorusing crows write their notes on the snow;
This place where you thought you could come and compose yourself
And find you have nothing to say, minor metaphors
That don't ring true where everything is what it is;
Even you if you measure yourself by what is true.
But truly you can't resist thinking in simile,
Words, not music, your forte: how the furrows have frayed
And broken over the fret of hills, how like your life.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2010-11-18 at 11:37

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melanie sue
Excellent.
2011-06-01



The work fits the frame. It seems effortless, though, it never is. I thought it interesting that the musical theme gave way at the end to thoughts about words. Naturally. Your keyboard, by choice, is not a Steinway but an HP (or, whatevs).

Frost said (he said a lot of things): To be a poet is a condition, not a profession.

He might have said it's an affliction. Or an addiction. I think it's a mindset, a way of looking at the world.
2010-11-19


Peter J. Kautsky
yes, so much like my life, wallowing in elusive truth.
2010-11-18