One of the things I enjoy about traveling to places where I don't speak the language is my silence, finding often in observing and listening the common
language of passion.




Unspoken

OUTDOOR CAFÉ, BIARRITZ

At breakfast they are rather quiet,
Saying more with brief glances than words.
When there are words, they are hers,
And he listens with his eyes,
Leans closer, touches her hand,
And she his as he lights her cigarette.

He has perhaps heard all this before;
No weddings rings, but an intimacy
That is comfortable, not yet well-worn
By too many years and honest betrayals.
He does not smoke, but there is smoky
Seduction in the way he smiles and
Drops his eyes at something she says.

At dinner they will lean across candles
And wine glasses, their food forgotten,
Growing cold as their touches simmer,
As she whispers, and he listens . . .
The waiter leaving them to their passion.


IN A PARK, SAO PAULO

So young . . . and so obviously their first love,
When every moment is achingly sexual,
Every touch is tentative foreplay in learning
The passion they cannot imagine diminishing;
Their shyness and limitations melting away
In the heat of their desperate entwining.

If there are seasons to love being learned
They are Spring, beautiful in their becoming
And blooming in the newness of their desire.
If they have not yet made love, they soon will,
And the thought makes my own passion rise.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2010-11-23 at 14:32

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Quite otherworldly when observing the movement and rituals of life... and yet so familiar and so undeniably us! A true achievement in poetry.
2010-11-24



These two poems of quiet observation, brought memories of my own (much limited) feeling of being alone and on the outside in a foreign country—a pleasant, and not so pleasant, experience.
2010-11-24


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Actions speak louder than words and in both of these pieces your observational prowess has come up trumps as the resulting imagery is striking.
2010-11-23