Light Turns To Darkness

The sun was so bright,
The moon lit the place,
A candle wasn't needed
To move to the next place.

The dark replaced the light,
The sun isn't shining,
The day became night,
The morning is grey.

Black circles surround me,
A desert with no end,
No more stars shining,
The moon ran away.

The candles blew off,
Not a ray of light shows,
A candle was useful
Maybe i'll make a move.

But now there's no way of moving
From this spot right now,
I'd fall in a pebble,
If I dared to move.




Poetry by krii
Read 483 times
Written on 2010-12-21 at 12:22

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


kurlz17
It's about when everything was good until sth happened and what felt good is lost ...

sad really how you can have something good and have it taken away by a choice ... i even think its silly xoxo
2012-03-29


John Ashleigh
You succeeded in telling us the story of your mind. You write beautifully.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-21