The Car Kiss

"Don't move! ", you order,
And I feel your lips on mine
Your tongue, gently probing;
I soften,
My insides warm and liquid
Each breath now a gasp;
"Let's drive, " I whisper




Poetry by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2011-01-04 at 12:58

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very sexy, Nancy. I have to disagree with Jim. I think that "Let's drive" says it all.
2011-01-07


vladimir turmanev
This reminded me,(longingly),that all I have is a pot-bellied stove. Thanks for the warm breeze to the Arctic.
2011-01-05


Nancy Sikora
When I wrote this, it didn't occur to me that it could be interpreted in a "high school parked car" context; I grew up in New York City and took the subway to school each day. We took subways everywhere! When I wrote this, it was more of an adult "Lets drive... to somewhere more comfortable" context which, IMHO, still maintains that feeling of anticipation, that there is more to come.

That's the beauty of poetry, the infinite ways that it can be interpreted. Always feel free to interpret it the way that gives you the most pleasure :-)
2011-01-04



I meant to say this is a sweet poem, I got caught up in the heat of the moment.

Still : )
2011-01-04


countryfog
You've taken me back to high school . . . it always ended like this, wanting more . . . as I do of your poetry.
2011-01-04



"Drive" was not the verb he was hoping to hear, I bet.

: )
2011-01-04


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Now that is hot!
2011-01-04