I hope to put it to music for a Mother's Day present
as my way of saying sorry for being a nasty bitch.

10/03/06 @ 11:59am on Friday.



Mum, I'm sorry for being a nasty bitch.[SONG]

[INTRO/PRE-CHORUS:]

Mum,
I wish I could have made you more proud
By being the daughter you wanted me to be
And i'm sorry for all this hurt i've caused
I love you and I am trying to be a better and nicer me.

[VERSE ONE:]

You have been by my side for all of my life
gentle hands wiping away my every tear
always sticking up, by and for me in times of strife
holding me tight and chasing away any fear.

[PRE-CHORUS:]

Yet I wish I could have made you more proud
by being the daughter you wanted me to be
and i'm sorry for all this hurt i've caused
I am trying to be a better and nicer me.

[CHORUS:]

I have said things I should have never said
and been more nasty then anyone could ever be
But Mum I'm sorry for being a nasty bitch
and thank you for always being here for me.

[VERSE TWO:]

I have never done drugs
nor have I been in trouble with the Law
Never really fell in with the wrong crowd
and for not doing that I know you're thankful for.

[REPEAT PRE-CHORUS AND CHORUS]


[BRIDGE:]

I wish I could of made you more proud
[I should never have said what I said]
You've been here for me for all my life
[Mum I'm sorry for all this hurt i've done]
[Reapeat twice]

[REPEAT PRE-CHORUS AND CHORUS TWICE]

[REPEAT BRIDGE TILL FADE (X3)]

copywrite by Liz Munro 10/03/06 @ 11:59am.






Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-03-10 at 01:59

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Teala
This is a good release poem--I am sure your mom will like it!
2006-03-15


CherryFairy
That's a good line... "Mum, I'm sorry for being a nasty bitch." My mom would just yell at me for saying bitch, but, whatever. Any mother would be absolutely speechless. It's amazing.
2006-03-15


Veld Cooper
Who could not kiss and make up after a write like that, dear Liz? Your mom will be most honoured, I'm sure.
2006-03-12


Zoya Zaidi
That is the spirit dear Lizzy,
It is easy to err,
but not easy to say sorry!
By saying sorry you have shown,
That you have risen above the
Petty squabble, that made you fly in rage,
That you have, sweetheart, finally
Realized your mistake!
As a mother, I am proud of, for having
had the courage to say sorry!
I do hope that your mother will
Also rise above her pride and
Accept you heartfelt apology!

Bravo dear Lizzy!

(((((Hugs)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-10