I like to find
what's not found
at once, but lies
within something of another nature
- Denise Levertov, "Pleasures"



In Forest Park

A few false-Spring days and what was held
Deep in the dark of winter pines and frost
Is now a small stream splashing to a precipice

Where it hesitates at the edge, then leaps
And hangs in the air, a second's suspension
Of light and motion, like the perfect tension

Of the memory you have of a beautiful girl
Holding on to the air at the top of her dive,
How she almost seemed to be reaching for you,

Until the gravity of its arcing inevitability
Compels its falling into the waiting silence
Of an azure pool even deeper than the sky.




Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-02-18 at 19:58

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melanie sue
Reading this was like admiring a Monet painting. And I desire to be that girl. I have had poetic visions of diving deep into the silence of relief and this revived those thoughts(some of which were also poetically penned in "Dive"). This poem was a pleasure to read and it was natural to connect to. Thanks for sharing it! :)
2011-02-19


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
And that pool would be your memory. Very nicely written, Fog.
2011-02-19


shells
Compelling, beautiful and the final stanza is superb.
2011-02-19