Sunday Ducks

A pond at the edge of the cemetery,

And it’s the drakes who first see her

Familiar approach, their rising calls

Ringing out like the opening ripples

Of their headlong rushing toward her,

All pretense of any circumspection

Left behind in their billowing wake;

The deep shimmering green of heads

And necks glinting on whirling water.

 

This kingdom is clearly a patriarchy

But she waits, a patient priestess,

For the women and children to arrive

Before she answers their prayers and

Casts her bread upon the hungry water.

She opens her arms and offers her flock

This benediction, this simple sacrament.

They open their wings, bow to receive it;

The sun and clouds a stained-glass window.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-06-02 at 18:13

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a fine poem, Fog. I have nothing to add to what the others have said, except that I found the last two lines of the first stanza to be glorious.
2011-06-07



Seconding shell's comment.
It's as if I have been transported to the particular moment in time and enjoying the scene and relishing the articulation of the experience in wonderful poetry.
2011-06-03


shells
I found this to be such an elegant write, the subject is such a simple one, but you turn it into so much more and your final line is just beautiful.
2011-06-03