we are words on a journey

not the inscriptions of settled people

     W. S. Merwin, "An Encampment At Morning"




Inheritance

Crossing this field and pasture no longer either

Half a hundred times or more, never knowing

Its owner and wondering each time as if it were

Some new thought revealed in an old question -

What kind of man could so easily condemn

This barn to its warped and rotting timbers,

To leave it to falter and fall into his neglect;

How the long years of his life and his work

Could have come to nothing more than this.

 

And perhaps the man has gone no less into

This ground, one stone left of what he cleared

To make his life, and his death, in this place,

This place that is still holding on in a way.

Even now it shelters a hundred small lives,

Mice and spiders, and furtive barn swallows

Who have inherited, in a way from the man,

Their instinct to return to rafters and eaves,

To the darkness he has entered and left them.

 

I come here now in my sixty-sixth year, perhaps

For the last time, and I begin to understand

An answer, and how it is not only his but mine.

I think of my children, as he must have thought

Of his own, of how they followed their own path,

How we have to walk alone our long last way,

All that we have lived and loved falling away.

My children, I have nothing to leave you now

But this place where I trespass and this poem.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-08-12 at 19:49

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
A building old or new , retains histroy , of good and bad times , even as it was being built , the day to day of those building the house , even that will be busies , barn or what ever , the building comes a live , and lives on fore years even an eternity , some who pass by may stop to linger , remembering what once stood on the land there , the barn you worked upon , your kin will insure it will tell a story or two , maybe more , for that will be their inheritances .
Ken ( D Williams )
2011-08-15



Empty and abandoned buildings have always fascinated me--the mind begins to wonder who lived there, what great things happened there, what ordinary events occurred there.

Don't forget memories. That, I think, is my legacy for my family and friends. Hopefully, perhaps on a rainy night with nothing much to do, they will recall a day or two when we were all together and the world seemed a benign, happy place and things like aging and death mattered not a whit.

Serene, pensive poem glowing with honesty and heart.

Regards,
William
2011-08-13


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I was not pleased to read this poem this morning, as I prepared to take inadequate steps to keep my home from continuing to deteriorate. Once upon a time, I wasn't aware of all that had to be done. Now, I lack the energy and motivation to do it. The barn will fall. I wish that it wouldn't. I won't be able to stop it. You've written a(nother) fine poem, Fog. I heartily endorse the last two lines.
2011-08-13


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm not far behind you and am enjoying the stripping away.
This made me smile and grimace...much as life does...
As always your voice sings around corners.
2011-08-12


ngaio Beck
Insight. Indeed a grand and glorious legacy.
2011-08-12