I HATE it!!!!


The Smell of Fear

Devastation courses through me
but is overtaken by rage
I am a roaring monster
in a tiny cage
What is wrong with you
to cause me all this pain?
Sometimes I wonder
are you even sane?
What right do you have
to do all this to me?
Does it make you happy?
Does it cause you glee?
I have taken this too long
and seek to end it here
Once you're gone all that will be left
is the smell of fear...



Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-03-22 at 02:12

Tags Smell  Fear  Pain 

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I love it
but why do you not like it?
Liz
2006-03-31


Feiyn
Wow you're great at rythmeing ( I know I didn't spell that right. My spelling sucks!) I think your poem portrays an aray of emotions
2006-03-22


PoeticProcrastination
Yowch! Full of anger, but I think it's really good!
2006-03-22