We are very lucky with how good
Our son James(10 months)is esp night sleeping
But he does have his moments

~L.~



A perfect joyful pain(Pantoum Challenge)


A joyful pain
Of sleeplessness and smiles
Laughter tears & games
You push boundaries extra miles.

Of sleeplessness and smiles
Learning to crawl
You push boundaries extra miles
We hug the tears away whenever you fall.

Learning to crawl
A perfect baby with trying moments
We hug the tears away whenever you fall
A joyful pain.

29/01/2012




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-01-29 at 00:12

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Blilith The PoetBay support member heart!
Another brilliant prose
I hope you have a happy life

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2012-01-30


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
A modern pantoum indeed:) I really liked this one!

"A perfect baby with trying moments
We hug the tears away whenever you fall"

wow so well expressed, described :) aren't we all perfect with trying moments? :) we can also, as grown ups, hug ourselves whenever we "fall" or each other:) your poetry is getting better and better:)really! *bookmarked as well*

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workoutrules
I have had many joyful pains with my boys,love this write,,and your son James so darnadorable!!

CyN

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