all i see is you

I remember us,
the way we used to be,
I'd hold you in my arms,
your smile so sweet to me,

But now when I see you,
you look right through me,
I feel so alone now,
but when I close my eyes...

...All I see is you.

The love we used to share,
gone up in whirl winds,
will I ever love,
or ever live again,

I am tired of crying,
and I am done trying,
To remember all about you,
but when I close my eyes...

...All I see is you.

All the love I am sending,
the memories I won't sell,
I know there must be an ending,
to the story I will tell,

I dream only of your love,
and happiness in life,
I try not to think of you,
but when I close my eyes...

...All I see is you.




Poetry by rach rckz
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Written on 2012-02-08 at 15:41

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Hans Bump
To feel heartache so deeply and transform it into lovely poetry is a blessing.
The format was very well polished and the language interlocked and fit together well. The tone drew the reader in to relate to the feelings of sorrow.
Well written
2012-02-10


Melissa Ormond
I love this! It's so full of emotion! I walked straight past ny ex-boyfriend, his Brother and his Mother earlier on today, and I had to work very hard to not take a second glance, and keep a straight face but I did it! Just remember ... an 'ex' boyfriend is an 'ex' for a reason! Keep smiling! I look forward to your next write!:)
2012-02-08