luscious dark(co-write with 2dark4u)

Skinny-dipping through luscious mist
naked ambition brought to life in the dark
there you can find what doesn't exist
perhaps even light a small spark

Bringing a bloody order to the strife
efficiently stalking through the night
in the helpful shadows chaos sparks life
making the dark whole and bright

Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-02-18 at 07:06

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It was fun, but my English is too poor for this kind of writing, perhaps later on :)

Blilith The PoetBay support member heart!
The two of you together, what can happen next. I have never written with anyone else. Awesome. You both write brilliantly, but together.....



Nice one you two, the word luscious works so well and I love the final line, don't know if it's a play on the word "whole" (hole) or not, either way 'tis good.

Manichean, with the cosmic battle between light and darkness. My favorite phrase 'bloody order.' Just as we cannot know the value of love unless we've known hate, light is meaningless unless contrasted to darkness. Good co-write.