you tell me:P i think i`m going crazy:P


Lord Nelsons last second

Thoughts filling me
deep as the ocean
where am i supposed to be?

in a mirror destroyd by images of ourselfes
i saw a glimse of an eye

once it was strong..

but now
it has moved away

leaving this childs body
to find someone else
to play with

Lord Nelson told me...
Smile when you hav the chance
it was the last thing he did on his dying bed ...
giving himself a childhoodyear..
all in his last second



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-03-31 at 00:11

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Jon Hanover
Was told by an artist friend of mine " poetry is for people who cannot afford therapy ". Works for me. Apart from spelling errors a good poem. Good twists to it as well.
2006-03-31


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
P.S: if you think you're going crazy now -
wiat til you go insane - it's a fun place to be :-p
Liz.
2006-03-31


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I don't quite understand the meaning,
but I do like the flow of this.
Liz
2006-03-31