Even though

All the songs written on love
makes all the effort seem pointless
'cause we're all gonna fail
must we dream that failure on, then?

And the words on love
in every poem at hand

are useless for those
who are seeking
the contrary

Love,
is all to blame
it is too big

though, all the effort
says
it is all
we are
here for

and must, and should, and will,
and do
declare

as the better
for the greater
good





Words by Ivan R
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Written on 2013-02-24 at 00:24

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zana
'Even though' - to me, is a synonym for 'a different point of view,' so I read this poem with full attention.
Refreshing, different, witty and I loved it.
2014-02-23



I hope you've been able to open your box. I read this poem and think that all love is worthwhile taking the chance. If we get hurt (or fail) we move on and having learned a bit more, try again. Wasn't it the master, Shakespeare who said, "For it is better to have loved and lost, than not to have loved at all." Actually, I am paraphrasing. :)
~Ashe
2014-01-14